Revan's Story

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Revan had just been lying on the grass in a big open field; not really doing anything. She wore her purple outfit; aka her evil one. She was just relaxing, her hands resting behind her head and her eyes resting easy. She had just been napping for a little bit, she had nothing to do and she had been a little tired so why the hell not? Her slumber was ruined when a few explosions went off in a nearby small town; a few screams were heard as well. Revan would slowly open her eyes, letting out a sigh as she sat up. She would then proceed to rub her brows with her thumb and middle finger; "What the hell was that?" She uttered softly and lazily to herself. She would then slowly and lazily rise to her feet, stretching a little bit as more explosions and cries for help were heard. She didn't really care, she just wanted some action, she was tired of sitting around.

Revan then took off high into the air, looking around for the town and quickly finding it as another explosion went off. Revan took off full speed towards the small town, hovering high above it as she watched what was happening below. These odd small blue tailed creatures were terrorizing the town, destroying buildings and killing the residents with ease; the town was doomed. Revan didn't care about the town or it's people, in fact she waited for a moment, just watching the five aliens terrorize the town. Revan would eventually grow bored and descend down to where the creatures had been, she wouldn't call out to them, she would just softly chuckle through her nose as an evil smirk came across her face.

All but one of the creatures were to busy terrorizing the town to notice her, the first one charged Revan and attempted to throw a punch at her, she simply grabbed it's wrist with her right hand, stopping the attack and squeezing as hard as she could, utterly crushing his leg; she would then toss him far to the right of her, proceeding to fire one big purple blast out of her right palm at him, completely destroying the creature. It would let out a loud evil screech as it died, being completely disintegrated after the attack. The other creatures would now all notice Revan, turning to her and cackling madly like hyenas. Revan softly shook her head at them, sliding into her 'Snake' stance before uttering, "Come."

Instantly all the creatures would rush at her at once, all of them would throw flurry's of punches and kicks at her; but Revan would dodge them all with ease, she had been far superior to these pathetic things. She would continue to toy with them, not attacking and simply dodging. No matter what trick the creatures would try to pull, Revan would evade it. The fight eventually dragged up into the sky, Revan had to keep on the move to evade everything, she didn't even bother to block; this was like a game to her. "Pathetic, is this all you can offer?" Revan would simply dash back to the ground in a burst of speed, looking up to the entire group and smiling as she put her arms up to the sky, her hands cupping together as her palms laid flat, firing off a good amount of very large purple blasts towards them.

Some of the group would be capable of escaping, but two others were caught by her attacks, being completely destroyed in a violent explosion; disintegrated just like the other one. The other three would look up to the sky for a moment, they couldn't believe that had just happened. They would wipe the look of fear of their face and return to the crazy normal one as they looked back to her; charging towards her at full speed only a second later. Revan simply lifted her right arm up, pointing her pointer finger at one of the aliens. "Dance for me..." She chuckled softly to herself as she fired off many beams towards him, one after another after another until he could no longer dodge and was hit in the shoulder, piercing through him with ease and causing him to drop to the ground. He would then struggle to get to his feet.

As soon as the alien was killed; which didn't take very long. The other two aliens would reach her, one of them throwing a kick with all it's strength towards her head while the other just threw a punch. Revan would simply duck under the attacks, throwing her palms upwards into their stomachs. The creatures would cough up as they curled over her palms in agony; knocking them back about ten feet. They would take a moment to recover before charging back in at her, throwing a flurry of punches towards her. Revan continued to move about, easily dodging every attack that was thrown at her. The one she had injured with the beam would get back up and join the fight once more, regenerating it's wound so it was back to full strength.

Revan still easily evaded their attacks, her power level was just too superior to theirs. She would throw a punch down into one of their cheeks, sending that one flying towards the ground. Another one she would hit with a swipe of her opposite arm, backhanding it into a nearby boulder. The third one would throw a heavy kick towards her head, but she caught him by his ankle with her left hand only; she was just that powerful compared to them. She would then proceed to pound into his face with her right fist two times; due to his small size this was easily done. Revan would then crush the leg she had been holding with ease. Her onslaught would not end there, she would toss him towards the ground, sending him there at a blind speed. She would then instantly follow up with a heavy kick into the back of it's skull, pounding it so hard into the ground that the aliens would be utterly crushed. Revan killed it. "Oops, I broke it..." She chuckled to herself.

The other two had recovered and charged her once again, each of them throwing an attack at her. Revan put both hands up catching their attacks with ease, "Do better. This is boring." She spun around, throwing them both separate ways; one of them flying into a boulder while the other just flew through the air til it eventually recovered and charged towards her again. Revan waited for it, going back into her 'Tiger' fighting pose. Instead of of dodging, she would block every single attack with her palms. The alien would continue to throw it's flurry's of punches and kicks for several seconds before Revan grew bored of blocking them all. Revan would throw a vicious palm into it's face, following up with blinding speed as it flew away; throwing her right elbow down into it's face, sending it hurling towards the ground.

The Alien she knocked away into the boulder now recovered and rushed her again, but Revan would not toy with this one; she ducked under it's fist attack which was a high kick, following up by thrusting both palms into it's chest. Revan hit it with with all her strength, hitting it with so much force that it's chest would cave in; shattering it's rib cage. The small blue alien would let out a death cry as it's mouth hung open, it would curl over her palms for a few moments before falling towards the ground. Revan spun around to view the other one she had knocked towards the ground, it was struggling to get to it's feet, it was in bad condition. Revan softly chuckled as she pointed her right hand at it, a powerful purple blast gathering in her flat palm. A few seconds would pass before she released the attack towards the creature, the creature would rise to it's feet as it looked up to the blast that would soon engulf it. It's eyes would simply widen as it was engulfed, then eventually disintegrated by the blast.

Revan spun flew down to the one's who's rib cage was crushed, standing before it looking down at it as it struggled to survive on the ground. She lifted her left hand up, pointing her flat palm towards it as she stood over it. She unleashed the same type of purple blast towards it, disintegrating it just like it's friend. Revan would softly chuckle to herself, a sexy confident smirk coming across her lips as she crossed her arms. "Too Easy..."

Suddenly a crazed townsfolk, a man to be exact, came running up to her getting onto his knees and wrapping his arms around her. He would then began to chant over and over. "Thank you, Thank you! Thank you!" He was a pervert though, he grabbed onto her butt and rubbed his face in against her waist. "Piss off..." She grabbed him by the back of his head with her right hand, lifting him up and holding him there as she held her left palm flat a few inches away from his face. "Huh? Wait no! Plea-!" Revan would then blast him, instantly killing him, turning him into nothing more than dust. She would just softly shake her head in annoyance before taking off out of the city. She didn't know what she'd do next, perhaps she'd fly around for a bit.


~Done, grade so I can move on

Okay. But for 25K I'm going to need a bit more.

There, better?

Good. Now Acceptable. . Rewards are as follows.

Rewards- +25,000 PL

((OOC: I hope my purple and pink text isn't to hard to read! If it is let me know, I just figured it be easier to color coordinate my Revan's, so it's less confusing >.< And just so everyone knows, Evil Revan is x2 stronger than Good Revan, that's why she transformed instantly to even up with her.))

Spoiler:

Revan flew far until she saw an interestingly massive forest; she figured a walk would be nice. She flew down into the forest descending slowly, her feet touching the ground softly. Revan then walked through the forest, her arms crossed and her eyes wandering about as she admired the land around her; the creatures were annoying. Everything would look better if it were on fire though...But that's just the evil speaking. She would walk deeper and deeper into the forest, the area started to change, becoming almost psychedelic; as if it were an illusion of some sort. Suddenly memories would rush to her head, her good memories with her friends, all of the things they did, and experienced together; they trained hard, didn't they? Her good side was just to pry it's way out of her mental shell, the evil had been in control to long; and the good Revan felt she was strong to take control.

Revan would grab her head in pain, pulling at her hair in pain. "Get out of my head weakling!" She yelled in frustration, grinding her teeth, her eyes squinting. She would look up to see an old man standing before her, he looked calm and happy; a little bit too calm and happy, he was odd. He suddenly puts his hands together, forming an odd hand sign with them, chanting a spell from his mouth; the words were not of any language. His hands would glow a bright white color, he would then proceed to extend his right hand towards her. it glowed even bright, but his left hand no longer glowed. He would place his hand on Revan's forehead and unleash his spell, sending her into a battle between the two personalities of Revan.

Revan could not fend off his spell, she couldn't move; her head was throbbing in pain for some reason. Once his spell was casted, she would fall to the floor unconscious. The old man simply turned away, his mission being complete; he left for home. Revan was sent into an entire new world, she would arrive lying on her back, just waking up; like she was asleep or something, she couldn't remember anything that had happened. She slowly rose sat up, her eyes slowly blinking as she regained consciousness. Revan would look up to see herself! Only dressed differently, she wore her original gray outfit. Her arms were crossed, she looked determined, standing there proudly and powerfully. "It's my body bitch..." She said as she pulled her arms from their crossed position so that she could crack her knuckles, she then assumed a charging position, using her 'Cybernetic Power' transformation to double her power level, making her even, maybe even a little stronger than the evil Revan. "Get up so I can kick your ass..."

Revan softly chuckled at her, rising to her feet as she looked into her eyes. "You look sexy in that outfit dear...But it's a tad bit revealing, I prefer this one..." She said with a soft chuckle, she had been wearing the purple outfit. She would assume an offensive stance, her 'Snake' stance to be exact. They looked the same, but fought differently. The good Revan tended to use the 'Tiger' stance, while the evil favored the 'Snake'...Revan simply charged in on the attack, throwing a flurry of palms towards the other Revan.

Revan smirked at her, she didn't look too bad herself, that's a bit conceited isn't it? What ever, she couldn't lose her focus, she had to win this! She stood on the defensive, dodging and blocking all of the other Revan's attack's before skillfully throwing an open palm into the other Revan's chest.

Revan simply took the palm into the chest, she had no choice; she underestimated her opposite and went rushing in to quickly. She would curl over her palm, coughing and letting out a soft groan. She would move back in, going back on the offensive and throwing a heavy high kick towards her counterparts face.

Revan would put both arms up, crossing them over one another as she blocked the kick; sliding back a bit due to the sheer force of the kick, but she held firm, it hurt though, causing her to let out a very soft sound of pain. She would proceed to attempt to sweep the other Revan's legs out with her left leg.

Revan saw the attack coming, flipping herself over as she attempted to drop her right leg down onto her opponents block, using a large amount of force as well.

Revan's block would crumble, her arms falling down as her shoulder slumped over; taking a few seconds to recover from it. "Ngghn"

Revan would instantly land and thrust her knee into the good Revan's gut, immediately following she would thrust her right palm up into her opponents chin.

Revan went up into the air for a few moments, then fall back down onto the ground with a hard thud. She shook her head, getting over the pain as she quickly rose to her feet, unleashing a heavy volley of attacks towards the Evil Revan.

Revan would cross her arms over her chest, her hands softly gripping her opposite shoulders. She would then violently thrust them outwards, creating an Android Barrier to protect her from all the attacks.


Revan would witness many large pink explosions go off, she figured the Evil Revan would just block them; but that smoke that hung around the barrier would be her weapon, she was going to use a powerful blast charged blast. The very second that smoke cleared, she won't have enough time to react; she began to prepare the attack.


((OOC: I hope it's okay that I have one new technique for the Good Revan, but I'm not going to use her yet, so I'll have to learn it anyway as Evil revan.

The quest is continued below))

Revan would put one arm outwards, her palms laying flat and her fingers standing tall and together, her thumb bent inwards a little. A large pink ball would gather in her palm, a confident smirking spreading across her face. As the smoke cleared, she would unleash her attack. "HYAH!"

Revan had let her barrier down once the attacks ceased, the smoke clearing and to her surprise a huge pink sphere was hurling towards her! She had no time to react, she simply crossed her arms in the shape of an X, attempting to block the attack as best as she could. She was eventually over powered, being caught in a violent pink explosion which shredded her outfit and roughed her up rather badly. She would fall from the sky and hit the ground with a thud, getting slowly back to her feet only a few moments later. She was injured, but she wasn't going down that easily. She would power up, raising her power level up to 350,000; she didn't fully power up or transform, holding back so this fight would remain interesting. Revan took off in a dash towards her counterpart, throwing a flurry of punches and kicks her way.

Revan couldn't quite keep up with the evil Revan anymore, she was just too fast, even with her injuries! Revan barely managed to dodge a few attacks. but couldn't evade a few as well. She was forced to block, hurting her to do so, but she would remain strong. Revan would then break her block and return that same flurry of attacks, forcing her counterpart to back up higher into the air; causing the fight to go higher into the air.


Revan would easily parry and evade her opponents attacks, backing up further and higher with each second. She would them stop backing up and charge forward in a burst of spped, throwing a heavy hook towards the other Revan's face. "Too slow!"

Revan would simply be pummeled by the punch, flying down towards the ground in a twist of pain. She would recover and fly back up, confronting her counterpart with an intense burst of attacks.

Revan would return the attacks with her parry's, using one of her attacks as an opening for a counter. She would grab her wrist and fling her opponent over her shoulder and throwing the other Revan towards the ground at a high speed.

Revan was hurled down towards the ground, but she would catch herself
midair, immediately unleashing a heavy pink blast with both hands. It would hurl towards her opposite at a great speed, it was going to hit.

Revan would put her hands out to catch the blast with her hands, her palms flat and fingers curling naturally as she gripped it tight. She would eventually gain dominance over the blast and toss it aside, throwing it into the ground and causing a massive pink explosion. "Not bad hun...But not good enough..." She said softly as she dashed forward towards her counterpart, throwing a flurry of punches towards her.

Revan sighed, she had a feeling that wouldn't work. She got on the defensive, preparing for the worst. Revan met her counterpart in close combat, dodging and blocking her punches. "I'll show you!" She would throw a heavy palm towards her face, and immediately following her other palm towards the other Revan's gut.

Revan pushed the first attack aside with a swipe of her left hand, but she wasn't able to deflect the second attack, taking it to the gut. She began coughing and groaning in pain, but quickly recovered as she threw a flurry of attacks that she could only use in her 'Snake' stance. They were all attacks from her pointer and middle finger, she would repeatedly thrust them at a blinding speed towards her opponent.

Revan would attempt to block all of the oncoming attacks, managing to keep up and do so for a few moments. Eventually she was overwhelmed and began taking the flurry of attacks straight to the chest, shoulders, and face; being unable to stop any of them anymore.

Revan would not stop the attacks, throwing her curved fingers towards her over and over, never growing tired. She only smirked as the attacks just kept coming...

Revan eventually regained her composure and knew she had to get out of this, she was stuck in for a little bit longer before she broke away. Revan would thrust her right knee towards her counterparts gut. "Hyah!"

Revan would catch the attack with her left hand, immediately throwing an open right palm towards her counterparts chin. "Too slow!"

Revan's head would cock back as it was hit, her lip busting and bleeding a little. "Nng." She let out a soft sound, throwing her right palm towards her counterparts face, stopping it a few inches before it and releasing a heavy pink blast towards her. This would cause a small explosion and smoke to rise around them, sending her opponent flying back through the smoke. Revan would follow up on the attack, dashing forwards high above her opponent and throwing a vicious elbow downwards onto the other Revan. "Take this!"


Revan was sent hurling away by the blast, then hurling towards the ground from the elbow. She would recover right before she hit the ground, catching herself and landing softly on both feet. She would look up to the sky at her, cocking her hands back then thrusting them forward, unleashing hundreds of small purple blasts towards her counterpart.

Revan would cross her arms over herself, then thrust them outwards to create her own pink Android Barrier, guarding herself from all the oncoming attacks. Smoke and explosions would gather around her, clouding her vision of her counterpart. "Shit, where'd she go?" She looked around as she dropped her Android Barrier, not sensing or seeing her counterpart before it was too late.

Revan would fly up to her counterpart, flying around to her backside to throw a heavy kick with her right leg towards her counterparts back, connecting the attack and sending her flying away from her. Revan immediately followed her, cocking her right fist back as she prepared an attack, throwing it at her counterpart once she reached her.

Revan would grunt in pain as she was sent flying forward from her kick, "Nnngh!" She would spin around just in time to be hit by another attack, only this time she managed to block in time, crossing her arms in the shape of an X before her. The sheer force of the punch would send her sliding back a bit, causing a mini-sonic boom from the sheer force of it, it hurt to block the attack, but she would fight through the pain and break the block off. Revan would then follow up to throw a flurry of palms towards her counterpart.

Revan would throw her own flurry of attacks to match her counterparts, surprisingly neither of them would gain dominance, as of right now there was only a 50k power level difference. The evil Revan had been holding back, but the good Revan was giving it her all, making that power level difference mean nothing! Neither of them could get the upper hand, though if Revan really wanted to, she could just power up and crush her good counterpart. But where would the fun in that be? She would throw a vicious palm towards her counterparts face, using her Kiai to help enforce the power of the attack. "HYAH!"

Revan would throw the exact same attack towards her counterpart, their palms colliding with great force, creating another massive sonic boom. This sonic boom and full of kiai energy from the both of them, it was so massive and powerful that it would send the both of them flying in opposite directions. Revan would catch herself after flying back a bit, stopping in her tracks and looking over to the evil Revan. "You're a thief! You stole my body! My friends! My life!" She yelled out in anger towards her as she assumed her 'Tiger' pose.

Revan would catch herself as well, about at the same time as her good counterpart, stopping in her tracks as she assumed her 'Snake' fighting stance. "Aw, isn't that sweet. You actually care for these imbeciles, it's a pity they all must die. This body is mine now sweetheart, and there's not a damn thing you can do about it!" She said with an evil smirk.

Revan growled in anger, grinding her teeth as she balled her fists, a scowl coming across her face as she stared down her evil counterpart. "I won't let you hurt them! I can't let you!" She hated her evil counterpart so much, she couldn't let her hurt her friends! She had grown attached to them, they were all she had, with out them she would be alone in this world once again.

Revan softly chuckled at her, an sadistic yet sexy expression coming across her face as her eyes met her good counterpart's. "Fool, they don't care about you! Have you looked at the mirror and seen that body of yours? That face? They want that! You're nothing more than a piece of meat to them! They don't care about you! Just what you have to offer them, their men! And you know what all men want...Once they've used you up, you'll be nothing more than yesterdays news and tossed aside like all trash...You're pathetic, you don't deserve this body!" Revan said coldly, trying to break her good counterparts spirit; she wanted to more than just beat her, she wanted to utterly crush her both mentally and physically.

Her eyes became a little teary, her expression trying to remain fierce and determined. She couldn't be right, could she? Her friends cared about her didn't they? Or were they just after her body like her evil side had said? Revan couldn't help but doubt herself, she wasn't very confident about herself. She had to be wrong! She just had to! Revan couldn't help but somewhat believe her though... "You're wrong! My friends would never use me like that! They love me! I'm more than what you say! I'm important to them! I won't let you hurt the people I care about!" Revan tried to make herself believe her own words, but she was having some difficulty, she wasn't very confident in herself. She charged up some, collecting energy for a massive attack, she just had to stop her!

Revan simply smiled at her, gathering her own attack, the 'Photon Flash'. She would cock her arms back, gathering two separate blasts; both of them being a light purple, she would bring them together and charge more energy into it, chuckling softly before she spoke. "Idiot...None of your techniques can compare to this!" Revan was ready to fire, but she waited, putting more energy into it...

"You're wrong!" Revan knew it was the time to use this new technique, but it was unpredictable, and she hadn't mastered it yet...She hoped this would work. Revan clasp her hands onto her forehead, similar to the Masenko technique. Revan's blast was pink, and covered in white electricity; this technique was designed to defeat other wave techniques, she had to win this. Revan had already gathered a large amount of pink energy into her palms before starting the attack, so it was definitely not quickly thrown together or weak. She was determined "Get ready to lose!"

Revan would fire her blast off first, it was massive and powerful and hurled towards her counterpart quickly. An evil smirk spread across her face as the attack went off, she was sure this was going to end with that attack. Plus this girl couldn't keep this up forever, her transformation was going to run out soon...Weakling..."Die!" She yelled as she blasted the attack


Revan fired her attack off right after she did, her attack wasn't quite as big, but white electricity followed the attack, orbiting inches away from the beam attack. It would meet her counterparts attack, being even at first surprisingly! The lightning began to slowly creep onto her counterparts massive beam attack, it took longer to travel up due to it's massive size.

Revan didn't understand how this was happening, and she didn't know what that lightning was, she's never seen the technique; she just assumed it was because of her aura or some new odd technique...She would simply power up more just for this attack, making it push her counterparts back slowly, eventually getting faster. Revan smirked evilly, she thought her counterpart's death would be soon...

The two blasts would collide, they were even for a short while, but eventually the large blast would gain dominance. The larger blast being the Photon Flash, electricity would orbit inches away from the Photon Shockwave, traveling up onto there other blast and creeping it's way up. The bright massive purple blast began to swallow the smaller pink one, though it would struggle to do so. The blasts would stop moving, the pink blast pushing it back a little, but then being dominated once again. The Photon Flash finally engulfed the pink blast, sending it towards the good Revan and utterly crushing her in a massive bright purple explosion. Though the Evil Revan didn't get off easy either, the electricity that hung on the Photon Shockwave had traveled onto the Photon Flash, spiking it's way upwards into the Evil Revan, shocking her violently.

Revan's blast would crumble, being pushed back and engulfed by her counterparts purple blast. It would hit Revan, completely thrashing her, her clothes being torn, many bruises and cuts would appear on her as she hurled towards the ground, hitting it with a thud. Revan was pretty roughed up, she was struggling to roll over onto her stomach so she could push herself off the ground and get up.

Revan would softly chuckle as her blast gained dominance, pushing the attack back into her counterpart. But not less than two seconds later electricity would spike upwards through her beam and into her, shocking her violently. Revan was hurt pretty bad, as an Android, shocks like that really stung. Revan was sent hurling towards the ground as well, crashing into it with a thud. Revan would do the same as her counterpart, rolling over and attempting to push herself off the ground.

Both of them would fall only a few seconds apart, and get up nearly at the same time. Both of them were roughed up, hair a mess, outfits torn, bruises and cuts spread across their figures. They were both panting as they slightly hunched over, staring at one another fiercely. They wanted to destroy one another, you could see it in their eyes...

Revan's left eye was beaten shut, she was unable to open it as she stared her evil counterpart down. "You...You're dead..." She huffed, struggling to assume her 'Tiger' stance, she was obviously in pain.

Revan didn't look much better herself, her right eye was beaten shut and she would struggle to assume her 'Snake' stance. "Imbecile...You're almost out of juice, and I've got plenty to spare...I've been holding back the whole time dear...You're nothing..." She mocked, trying to break her spirit, though it had been mostly true.

Revan didn't want to believe her statement, but for some reason she couldn't help but do so. Revan softly shook her head, taking one step forward as she unleashed a blast from her right hand towards her counterpart.

Revan would simply copy her movement, doing the same as her; at this point she was just toying with her. Her purple blast would collide into her counterparts pink one, causing a decent sized explosion in between them. Revan would then take off towards her counterpart, flying through the smoke and getting ready to throw a heavy punch.

Revan would watch their blasts collide, immediately flying forward at full speed, cocking her fist back for a punch. A fierce look held upon her face as she flew into the smoke, she had a feeling this might not end well...

Both the Revan's flew towards each other, meeting in the cloud of smoke, each of them throwing a heavy punch towards each others cheek, using opposite arms so they both hit each other at the same time. They hit with an excessive amount of force, busting each others lips and sending them skidding back a couple feet out of the cloud of smoke. A sonic boom was created from the sheer force of their punches colliding into each others faces. The two of them were worn down, beating each other to a bloody pulp. They would both recover, wiping the blood from their lips then charging forward again. They met in close range combat, throwing flurry's of punches and kicks, countering each others attacks with great speed. Every now and then a hit would get through, and it never was pretty, it hurt and caused moans and groans of anguish. Their fight fell towards the ground, staying there as they kicked the crap out of one another, neither of them having the strength to dodge anymore, only to block and possibly counter. They seemed even, neither of them gaining dominance for more than thirty seconds. They moved with blinding speed even with their injuries, dashing about the ground, knocking each other back and forth. It was indeed a close fight, but the Evil side would soon prevail if she were to stop toying with her Good side...


Revan got in a lucky hit, striking the other Revan across the face with her palm. She smirked evilly as the attack hit, noticing the pain and damage it had caused and enjoying it.

Revan would feel blood rush into her mouth, her facing turning to the left and slightly upwards as she stumbled back a step or two. That hurt like hell, she couldn't open her mouth, her jaw felt broken. Revan did her best to shake it off, she was damn determined and couldn't let that stop her; she never spit out the blood. Revan moved in, throwing a palm right into her evil counterparts nose, busting it. Revan would huff, a satisfying smirk coming across her face as she looked towards her, gathering ki into her left hand. She would open her mouth slightly, letting the blood drip from her lips towards the floor; the only thing keeping her standing was sheer will power...

Revan stumbled back, her hands moving to her face to hold her nose in pain, a small amount of blood dripping from her nostrils..."You bitch...You'll pay!" She charged forward, lunging her knee into her opponents gut. Then following up with a vicious backhand from her right hand.

Revan spat out more blood as her counterparts knee pounded into her gut, letting out a groan of pain, sounding as if she wanted to vomit. Her face turned with the vicious backhand, spitting out a small spray of blood again. With the last of her strength she would thrust her left palm forward, unleashing a heavy blast that she had been gathering while taking that punishment.

Revan had almost not time to react, plus with her injuries stopping the attack now would be impossible. She merely took the blast at point blank range, being sent hurling back after the explosion went off directly on her, damaging her even further. Revan would skid across the ground as she left the pink smoky explosion, eventually skidding to stop and laying flat on her stomach; she seemed to be unconscious, but she was actually just trying to recover, in secret she would struggle to gather ki into her right hand's pointer finger.

Revan would smirk in victory, huffing out of breath as her arm still stuck out, her left one hanging lifelessly at her side. She was really beat up, she was barely standing and her transformation was coming to an end soon. She would soon pass out, she did her best, she seemed to have knocked out her evil counterpart; she wasn't moving and nearly twenty seconds had passed. Revan would struggle to walk over to her, taking slow easy steps towards her. She was going to finish this once and for all...

Revan would remain silent the entire time, she had been defeated, her body was in too much pain to fight anymore; she needed a sensu bean badly, but for some reason they were no longer with her. Perhaps the objects she had in the physical world didn't come into this one. Maybe she wouldn't get out herself, I mean how would she? Did she just come out once one of them win? If so, she would be out of here soon enough. With the last of her strength she rolled over, pointing her right hand at her good counterpart, struggling to hold it up and fire it towards her. The beam was decently sized and a dark purple, moving at blinding speeds towards the good Revan's heart; Revan had used her Android targeting to help make sure the attack would be dead on...

Revan had no time to react, being hit in the chest and knocked out instantly, falling to the left and hitting the floor with a thud. A tear flowed from her left eye as she felt herself slowly fade, she knew it was over, she knew she had lost, she knew she was going to die. Her tear drop would fall and hit the ground as she died, it was a painful but quick death; but it wasn't real, she experienced death, but this was all just a dream...None of it was real, it was just a mental battle between her two personalities. It proved that the good Revan was not ready to take control, she was just not strong enough.


Revan softly chuckled to herself, closing her eyes and passing out. She was completely exhausted from the fight, but it allowed her to keep her control over the body. Revan was still the evil Revan in the physical world, until some one took her down, or Revan took her down herself...

Revan would wake up several hours later in the same forest. She would slowly sit up, her head was slightly in pain still, just not nearly as badly as before. She looked around slowly, opening her eyes for the first time in a few hours, blinking slowly as she regained consciousness. The old man was no where in sight, neither was her good counterpart, and the forest also seemed normal. Revan would rub her head with her right hand, slowly rising her feet as she rubbed the back of her neck with her same hand. Revan began walking away from this area, softly sighing to herself, heading towards somewhere relaxing to help get rid of this headache.
((Done! Grade please...))

Nev okayed this, but forgot to grade it.  Since the quest bonus is already so high, I'll let you stick with just that.  Good job, though.  PLx2, -30 alignment.

Spoiler:

Revan went back to the city, finding a cheap hotel to stay the night in so she could get some rest from that horrible experience with the old man and her good counterpart. Revan simply payed the owners for a single night and walked up to her room, pushing the doors open and stumbling to the bed that lay in the middle of the room. Revan hadn't even bothered to undress, she just fell onto the bed and slept; she was completely exhausted.

Morning came quickly, the sun shining brightly through the windows and onto her, eventually waking her up. Revan's eyes would slowly open to see the blinding sun glaring down upon her, she turned over and let out a cute yawn; she just wanted to go back to sleep. Revan knew she couldn't though, she sat up and stretched, letting out another cute yawn. Revan would bring her hands to her eyes and rub them, then run them through her hair. She slowly sat up and walked over to the bathroom to primp herself in the mirror, she may have been a warrior, but she liked to look good, and that was something she was damn good at.

After she had finished grooming herself, she would step out of the bathroom and head towards the exit of her hotel room, then towards the exit of the hotel itself, strutting proudly along the way. Revan felt a hell of a lot better, she felt like her old self again. She stepped outside and looked around at the busy city, cars and people running about, loud noises ringing through her ears; she hated the city. Revan softly shook her head as she let out a sigh, she needed something to do, someone to fight. Revan simply wandered through out the city, her arms crossed and her eyes closed so she could ignore all the men staring at her, she would just ignore anyone who said anything to her, just continuing to walk.

Suddenly something drew her attention to the big screen that was located on a massive skyscraper in the middle of the city, nearly everyone in the city could see it. It was a 'Most Wanted' list, naming several men and their bounties, all of them wanted dead or alive, but their was a catch, the bounties were cut in half if they were brought back dead. Revan liked the sound of that, that would make this challenging, she scanned and memorized the picture of the most expensive bounty, figuring that he had been the most powerful. Almost twenty five thousand...Not bad...Now to find this imbecile... She thought to herself.

Revan flew up high above the city, startling a few citizens by doing so, but she didn't care. She would look around the city, activating her scanners and looking for the man who's photo she had recognized; after several moments her scan was complete, and this man was not here. "Damn it..." She softly muttered to herself...

Revan decided to fly over to the larger sister city located to the east of here, she flew in a burst of speed, going as fast as she could. Revan quickly arrived high above East City, looking around it with a dull expression on her face; she was scanning the area thoroughly. Several moments would pass before something began beeping on her scanner, immediately it allowed her to pin-point her bounties location. Revan would then pursue it, taking off in a quick burst of speed towards him, ripping through buildings to get there, she quickly found him hidden amongst a massive crowd with in the heart of the city.

Revan softly chuckled as she pointed her right hand towards him, charging up a purple beam in her pointer finger; only pointing that finger at him. She would then quickly fire off the attack, a thin beam traveled towards her bounty, causing a massive explosion in the middle of the crowd where he had been standing. The crowd of civilians that were around him were either completely and instantly disintegrated or blown away from the sheer force of the attack; there were very few survivors. The explosion caused smoke and debris to fill the area, small rocks raining from the sky as Revan stood there calmly with her arms crossed, scanning the situation. Revan knew he wasn't dead and knew it wasn't going to be that easy, but she would still come out on top as always. Revan would only softly chuckle at the chaos and panic she had caused to spread through out the city, hundreds of civilians running about screaming their heads off, cars driving out of control just trying to get out of there, but only causing more destruction by being so reckless. "These humans are pathetic...Worthless scum..."

Her bounty's name was Phoenix, a rough renegade biker with a lot of power, he had blocked her attack, standing in the midst of everything with his arms crossed in the shape of an 'X'. The smoke hadn't cleared yet, giving Phoenix the perfect time to strike, he would quickly move in on the attack. Revan then cupped her hands together as she prepared another attack to fire off into the smoke towards him, but she was quickly interrupted by Phoenix who had quickly used his after-image technique to appear to the left of her. He would then swing his right fist into her left cheek, knocking her out of her stance and sending her flying to the right.

Revan would catch herself mid-air, being barely a foot off the ground. She would then slow herself by digging her feet into the ground, ripping it apart as she skidded to a stop. "Nghnn..Lucky shot..." She softly uttered as she slid into her offensive stance, her palms flat, her fingers standing up straight and close together. Her form was natural, her left side taking the front and her right taking the back. Revan then waited for him to make his next attack, her power level still unknown to him since she had been an Android, but she kept it decently low to keep this fight interesting, about 450,000. "Come on big boy..." She said teasingly, enticing him into making his next move hastily, which would be a mistake on his part.

Phoenix growled in annoyance at her his brows furrowing as his eyes squinted, "Stupid girl!" He growled as he moved in a burst of speed towards her, his fiery orange aura following behind him, his right fist cocked back, getting a massive punch ready. He would unleash his attack towards her face, but it was caught be Revan's flat left palm, her fingers curling over his fist. It wasn't done that easily though, the sheer force of his bunch would slide Revan back a few inches, but she would stand firmly not losing balance, strength or grip. "Almost..." She said teasingly as she smirked at him, enticing him into being more foolish.

Phoenix would growl again, his nostrils flaring as he began to become impatient and annoyed with her. He would throw his left fist towards her as well, trying to hit her with his free hand. Revan would put her other hand up, her palm flat as she caught his punch a little more easily than last time, but she would still slid back a few inches. The two of them were now in a lock of power, her hands curled around his fists as they pushed against one another, trying to gain dominance. Revan had obviously been holding back, but she had to keep this interesting, she didn't get to fight very many people who could last against her. "Is that the best you've got...?" She chuckled teasingly at him as she fought against his grip, slowly winning.

Phoenix would growl as he pushed against her, but he knew this was going nowhere fast, he needed to power up. "I'll show you! Nnnnnnghhhhh....RAAAAAAAAAAGH!" He yelled at the top of his lungs as he powered up, his power level jumping past his maximum, flying into a rage of energy and power; something the humans were known to be good at. Revan hadn't expected this sudden spike of energy and raising of his power level, it took her by surprise and left vulnerable for an attack. Phoenix took this moment to strike, thrusting his knee into her gut, ending their struggle for power with ease.

Revan would curl over his knee, coughing up a bit as she was hit hard in the gut. "Ngh" She would let out a soft groan of pain, unable to recover quickly enough to throw a counter or get out of the way for his next attack, she needed to power up in order to keep up with him. Phoenix took advantage of her weakened state, pushing her down onto her knees before him, their grip on each others hands never leaving. Revan was being overpowered at the moment and they're wasn't much she could do about it until she powered up. Phoenix softly chuckled at her as he looked down to her, he felt confident, but way too confident. "You look best when you're down there like that..." He chuckled perversely, he would then follow up to thrust his knee into her face, sending her flying backwards out of his grip and into the air

Revan had no choice but to take the hit and go airborne, still being unable to escape his attacks at the moment; this was getting interesting for her, she knew she would be okay, but she was happy this man gave her a challenge. Phoenix would quickly pursue her, flying high above her and throwing a double axe handle punch down onto her, sending her hurling towards the ground. Revan hit the ground with a massive boom, a decent sized crater forming as smoke and debris filled the area around it. Phoenix chuckled up in the sky, slightly out of breath. "Who's the weakling now! Hahahaha!" He laughed madly to himself, figuring he had won already, a cocky and foolish mistake. Revan looked a hell of a lot worse than she actually felt, she was pretty roughed up, her lip had been bleeding a bit and her clothes were a bit torn now, but it meant nothing.

Revan would quickly rise to her feet with in the smoke, because she was an Android, powering up was quickly done and no one could pick up your power level as you did it; making it very stealthy. All of this was hidden by the smoke, using it to her advantage. Less than a second later she appeared behind Phoenix, a confident smirk spread across her face as a soft chuckle passed her lips. "You are..." Revan would then immediately back hand him with her right hand, sending him flying to the right. Revan would use the afterimage technique once again, appearing below him as he flew away from her. Revan would then quickly grab him into a full-nelson hold, binding him with ease. "Hey hun..." She said softly into his ear as she quickly flew higher into the air, flying higher and higher until the people looked like ants.

Phoenix growled in annoyance as she struggled in her grip, despite him being much larger than her, he could not break free of her grapple on him. "Let me go! You'll pay for this I swear it!" He yelled in anger as he continued to struggle, but to no avail. Once Revan reached the desired height she stopped moving, simply floating there. "Let me show you my true power..." She softly spoke as she chuckled into his ear as she began to charge up, using her 'Cybernetic Power' Transformation. A massive and violent aura of blue electricity would encircle her, shocking around at random and violently shocking Phoenix as she gripped him. Every second Revan held him, he was being shocked violently with her powerful energy. "GAHHHH!!! NGH! HELP ME!"

Revan then immediately flipped herself upside down, him with her still. She would then fly towards the ground at full speed, looking down to it from her inverted position, getting ready to unleash a devastating attack that would most likely end the fight instantly. The entire way down towards the ground Phoenix was being shocked over and over by her electrifying aura, being completely unable to escape her attack at this point, he only yelled at the top of his lungs as he got ready to face his inevitable doom. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

Revan released him at the last second, barely twenty feet from the ground, giving him literally only a split second to react due to the extreme velocity that they were traveling at. Phoenix crashed into the ground with a large boom, creating a massive crater which caused many buildings, cars, and civilians to be destroyed. Smoke and debris would fill the area, it was rather massive so it would take a bit of time for it all to clear. Revan had simply flipped out of the way and back into her normal flying stance, her arms crossed as she floated there looking down at the destruction she had caused with a sinister smirk; her electricity had died out since she had powered down, knowing that this fight was over.

Once the smoke had finally cleared, the massive amount of destruction had been revealed and in the middle of it all laid Phoenix's either unconscious or dead body; either way she could care less. Revan descended down to him, standing over him proudly with her arms crossed, that usual evil sexy smirk tugging across her lips. "Pathetic..." She spat on the ground beside him, then knelt down so she could yank him up off the ground by his hair, pulling her right arm from it's crossed position to do the job. "You're worth 24,000 Zennie huh...Wonder what the hell you did, you don't look all that tough or bad ass to me." Revan didn't get much of a response from him, she wasn't even sure if he was still alive, and Revan couldn't be bothered to check.

Revan rose back to her feet and rose back into the sky, carrying his body with one hand at her side, holding him by his hair as she flew away. Revan was heading back towards the city she had seen the 'Wanted' ad in, intending to return his dead or unconscious body in to the local authorities so she could get her pay. Revan could care less how much it was, as long as it was something to buy food and clothes with.

((Done, Grade when you have the time. Oh and I never stated whether he was dead or alive because I wanted an Admin to decide for me. So did he survive my attack and was just knocked out, or was he killed? Your call, by the way Phoenix is the bounty, I just named him so it'd be easier to identify him.))

Oh, he's definitely dead.  + 40,000 PL, + 12,000 Z.  But since you wrote well enough, I'm gonna give you another 4360 PL.